how does this wording sound?

Discussion in 'Pregnancy Help' started by newtothis, Apr 15, 2009.

  1. newtothis

    newtothis Well-Known Member

    Twice the love and twice the toys,
    Thank-you so much for showering our boys!

    how does this sound? should i re-phrase or edit anything? should it say, 'twin boys?'
    i made my own thank yous and and need to order them now! LOL
     
    newtothis, Apr 15, 2009
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  2. tamaras

    tamaras Well-Known Member

    Sounds adorable, I would leave it! :good:
     
    tamaras, Apr 15, 2009
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  3. TwinLove

    TwinLove Well-Known Member

    I would leave it too. No need to add the "twins" part to the boys. :good:
     
    TwinLove, Apr 15, 2009
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  4. Trishandthegirls

    Trishandthegirls Well-Known Member

    I think it flows better without the word 'twin'. That's a really cute saying for your cards...
     
    Trishandthegirls, Apr 15, 2009
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  5. babymOmmax2

    babymOmmax2 Well-Known Member

    Love it.. sounds great the way it is!
     
    babymOmmax2, Apr 15, 2009
    #5
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